In Room 7 we are learning to write to persuade people:
Chocolate should be banned at easter.
I believe that we should not have chocolate because it will make you sick and not healthy and you need to have some 5PLUSADAY!!!!!!!!
It has toO much fat and milk chocolate 100% for sure and because you can get too fat!! Children can get a little hyper and drop wrappers and then the children will cry! NO MORE EASTER EGGS AT EASTER THEY $COST TOO MUCH!!!!
by Luke
A secret Easter bunny or two came to visit us in R7 and filled the Easter baskets we had made. We were very lucky! Thanks Easter bunnies!
Interesting persuasive writing Room 7! I'm not sure I think chocolate should be banned at Easter but I do think some people may need to eat a lot less!
ReplyDeleteCute bunnies!!
Liam M - I don't think chocolate should be banned at Easter because it is ok to have a treat once in while. :-)
ReplyDeleteI LIKE CHOCOLATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love chocolate! But I do love the dark one .The good news that the best chocolate is expensive and you need to eat just a little bit. You steel need to eat fruits and veggies every day. I don't like fast food and soft drinks, so I have chocolate and coffee for special treats. Very pretty Bunny on the top row!
ReplyDeleteI LIKE CHOCOLATE 5 DAYS A WEEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOooooh I love chocolate, especially the dark stuff!!! YUMMY!! Awesome photo Room 7.
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